First, read Ginny Wiehardt’s piece on writing dialogue.
Now, imagine you are at a fancy dinner. The guests in attendance are the characters from our fiction unit. Write a story/dialogue piece where the characters speak to each other. You decide what they say but to achieve credit for this assignment they must say something relevant to their actions in the story. For example, the very old man with enormous wings might say, “I hate it when the butter gets caught in my wings, it’s hard to fly when that happens.” Your post should include conversation from each of the characters listed below and be a total of 400 words.
Montressor
Fortunato
Rainsford
Ivan
Whitney
Zaroff
Mr. Summers
Mrs. Hutchinson
Tessie Hutchinson
Toto
Joel
Their Parents
Their Classmates
Bill
The Man
The Very Old Man With Enormous Wings
On beautiful day there was a fiction unit party for all characters that Westlake High School 9th graders read. The host was Mr.Summers. So first guest was Tessie. "Hey Summers can I come in." Tessie said. "No said Summers. "Why I can't come in said Tessie." "Caused I said so Mr.Summers said." "This isn't fair Tessie said." So Tessie left out the door crying. Mr.Summers was laughing at her. Out of no where there was an old man with wings crashing through the roof. "Sorry said the old man with wings. "Go in sir" said Mr.Summers." There was a limo driving by with a man falling out of it. It was Rainsford. "Is this the fiction unit party said Rainsford" Yes sir you may go in said Mr.Summers." When Rainsford went in he had a puzzled look on his face. The old man with wings said; "Sir I'm not an angel ok I'm a regular person with wings ok." "Ok said Rainford. Next coming through the door was Zaroff. He had a plate of cooked brain from one of his hunties. He said; "Hello everybody How you doing today."My name is Zaroff but you can call me General." Next coming through the door was Bill limping. "Can anybody pass me a chair please." An old man with wings passed him a chair. "I limped all the way here from my house." After Bill's speech there was a group classmates came in laughing and playing around. They didn't say anything to characters inside.Next was Mr.Hutchinson looking all business casual. "Hello ladies and Gentlemen how you guys doing today."Fine said the crowd in the room. "May I sit down, thank you." The diner room was so quite that you can hear somebody breath. Tpo disturb the peaceness was Joel and Toto making alot of noise. "Hush please said Zaroff." "ok they said." Next was Whitney walking through the door. She was giving evrybody a hug for no reason. All the characters had a puzzled look on their face. "Hello everyone my name Whitney." "Sorry for being so late. After Whitney's speech she sat down. Next was Invan looking bumy. "Whats up guys My name is Ivan, how youu doing to day. Last but not least was Fortunato and Montressor. The smelled wine and hennessy. They couldn't walk right. When they greeted the other guest, they were acting drunk and silly. They sat down and all the characters were eating while Tessie was looking out the window crying and saying "this isn't fair.
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I’m sitting at the head of the table, to my right is Montressor and to my left is Fortanado. Next to Montressor is General Zaroff and next to Fortunado is Whitney. I’m listening to the General and Whitney compliment each other, “That was very good technique you used Whitney, honestly I didn’t think I would catch you, that fox trail really threw me off for a second.” said Zaroff. “Thank you general, I thought for sure you would have seen me in your room. The way that you managed find me every time it was as tough you could smell me and track me like a dog.” replied Whitney. I quickly became bored with their conversation so I moved onto Montressor and Fortanado’s peace treaty. “Please forgive me Fortunado; I was going mad, I wasn’t thinking. Trust me I was plagued with guilt after I murdered you; so plagued that not one week had passed after I executed you so brutally that I killed myself. I hung my self in the vineyards of Don Camillio.” entreated Montressor. “It is fine my friend, I shouldn’t have continued to torment you.” replied the ever jovial Fortunado. “So we are comrades again?” there was a pleading sound in Montressor’s voice. “Of course my friend, we will let bygones be bygones” answered Fortunado. “Thank you my friend, thank you so much. I am indeed indebted to you for relieving my guilt.” said the now humble Montressor. “No you are not, as I said let bygones be bygones, all that has happened is now forgiven.” replied Fortunado. Okay, so now everything was fine between Montressor and Fortunado. I get up to walk around the table and greet my guests. General Zaroff’s bodyguard Ivan salutes me from the back of the room; I go over and see what he wants “Do you know what it was like to work for General Zaroff?” Ivan asks, “Zaroff was my spiritual and physical mentor, my father was not loyal to the Czar. So Zaroff breeded me to become a loyal servant to the Czar, he is an odd and cruel man, he forced me to become his personal bodyguard. I was forced to go on all of his hunting trips, I had to save his life a few times you know.” said Ivan. “Oh wow that’s crazy.” I said. I see Rainsford come in frantically, his eyes wide with anticipation “ Where is he? Where’s Whitney? Is he here? I heard he was here!” he asked. “Rainsford calm down friend I’m right here.” Whitney calmly answered. Rainsford replied “Whitney? Whitney is that really you? I never thought I would see you again. We have so much to talk about.”
ReplyDeleteJoel and Toto was walking down the street listening yo Eazy-E and singing the lyrics to "Boyz N The Hood." When all of a sudden there friends Ivan and Whitney was passing out fliers for a dinner party. Joel said "Man where is this dinner party going to be at?" Ivan responded "Oh, man on 4th street West of Compton." Joel said " That's whats up!" As Whitney walked by they ll said " What's Up" to him. So as Joel and Toto was walking home Their Parents was waiting on them outside. Their Parents asked "Where have yall been?" Tot responded "Listing to Eazy-E Boyz N The Hood!" Well he got slapped upside the head for being smart mouthed. Then Joel said "With Ivan and Whitney. Their Parents went in the house and sat down. The next day The very old man with Enormous Wings was outside. When Toto and Joel came outside the stated to laugh The very old man wit Enormous Wings and said. "You look stupid let's take a picture and put it on twitter!!" "So here come The Man." Joel said. The Man said " Stop laughing at him or you two are going to get a spanking." The two boys looked at each other and laughed. They walk to there bus stop to go to school. Their Classmates was very loud and very crazy. Their Classmate asked " How are you Joel and Toto?" Joel and Toto both responded "Fine how about y'all. Wait don't answer that." said Toto. So they are on there way to school. The teacher Mr.Summer is in class talking and asking them do the like the lottery and other question. then he asked " How are you guys and girls doing today on this bright in graceful Wednesday Morning?" Next thing you know Rainsford comes out of nowhere swing on a vine that lead to the rain-forest but e don't know how he does that? " That's Crazy!!" Ivan said. Rainsford said. "I am having a diner party on 4th street west of Compton." Then Joel and Toto look at each other than looked back at Rainsford and thought he was crazy. "If you stay somewhere close to that or on the street come on down to my nice ole' Diner Party it will be fun!" Joel and Ivan and Toto Turned around and Whispered. "He Is Very Crazy Like No Doubt!!" The bell had ranged it was only a half of day today. School was out we went home and got ready for Rainsford Dinner Party he was having. Hopefully it would be very nice and nothing strange would happen. Their Parents Says " Joel and Toto be good and don't do anything stupid and please leave the very old man with Enormous Wings alone.!" They both said "Okay." then got out of the car. Just to see every they had knew there at the dinner party only for two people name Mrs.Hutchinson and Tessie Hutchinson. The Dinner Party was to welcome them to the neighborhood. So they go inside and here comes Rainsford again swing from that Vine that comes out of nowhere saying "HE'S ALIVE, HE'S ALIVE." No one knew what that was for anyways. Bill the servant comes out and really has nothing to say but " Thank you and Your Welcome." It really is crazy. Then All of a sudden these two weiord people come in named Montessor and Fortunato and they are screaming "EVERYONE GET TO THE BASEMENT RIGHT NOW RIGHT NOW NO JOKING AROUND RIGHT NOW!!!" "An no one every knew what happen after that because i was the only to to sirvie." Said Bill the quiet servant?
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Dinner for sixteen of my special guest. It will be hosted at Cherry-Rock Manner so please come. Everybody who receive the information came the first to arrive were a wife and a husband and there to boys name Joel and Toto. More people arrive as the time passed by the inside of the building was huge a maid stop everybody and said let me show you to you're rooms she said dinner will be ready at 7:00 sharp. It was that time people began to come down stairs appetizers were set out everywhere. One person name Fortunato replied my this is wonderful but what would make it greater is if I had some wine. Excuse me good sir but did you say wine ask a young man name Montrosaur why i have a case of my special wine sitting on the couch Ill go get it but first were is are host. Classmates from the children school saw a huge dark figure they said who are then suddenly. Everyone settle down I am your host Mr.Summers lets sit down and feast shall we. Joel an Toto said he looks ugly don't talk like that your already judging people your mother right stop. A old man name bill who is a servant ask people today we will be having a variety of foods if you don't like you can lick the bottom of my shoe. Well he isn't quiet in a good mood is he Ms.Tessie replied her smart husband i guess not he needs to cheer up and serve us our food indeed Tessie. One person came in dressed with many animal skins this man was named Sanger Rains ford a famous hunter know far and wide he shouted to everybody I made it I was just about to go hunting but I decided to come eat dinner first. While the food was being prepared everybody talk and enjoy themselves but nobody cared to notice that a big black shadow came beside Mr.Summers he knew who it was one of his right hand man name Ivan sir we have a problem in the kitchen him and Ivan walked out into the next room where the kitchen was. A pure Russian man came in he was late for dinner he to his seat and was very surprised by what he saw a old man with two huge figures on his back they were white The Russian ran over an said hello General Zaroff what your name I have no idea said the old man. I have to haunt you you must be on my trophy wall I will give you three hours to start after dinner an I'm not joking sir the man ignored him. Out of nowhere Rainsford said has anyone seen a young girl name Whitney she was suppose to be here a hour ago here i am said Whitney what you want a cigar no thank you. Suddenly a loud sound swept across the room its gonna blow Boom Boom! Nobody knows what happen but they were all dead Hello I'm here got dang it I miss Dinner and a Show replied The Man way behind schedule.
ReplyDelete“How are you today everyone”, said Montressour as he greeted his many guests. “How has your night been so far?”
ReplyDelete“It’s been just dreadful” replied Fortunado, drunk from drinking too many glasses of amontillado.
Montressour glanced over to Ivan who was sitting beside general Zaroff. Ivan gave Montressour a cold stare, and he shivered at this.
“Aren’t we supposed to be hunting some big game? That is what my invitation said.” Said General Zaroff in a strong voice.
“Now sir, I believe my friend Rainsford had told ma about you.” Said Whitney
“Yes. I have hunted the friend that you speak of.” Replied Zaroff.
“Uumm, ok?” said Whitney in a slightly confused voice.
“When will we feast?” said the Hutchinson’s in unison.
“We shall soon” said montressour in a slightly deceptive voice.
In his loudest most announce like voice Mr. summers said, “Where are your resting facilities?”
“Down the hall to the right” said montressour.
“Excuse me mister.” Said Toto
“Yes” replied montressour
“Where are your light switches?” he said in almost a whisper
“No!!” screamed their classmates “that would be the ultimate death of us. We aren’t cats you know; we don’t have nine freaking lives!”
“Hahaha, you guys are bonkers. I’m going to break a light bulb somewhere in a wet suit” said Joel in a slightly sarcastic tone of voice.
The questioning look on everyone’s face only grew when Joel walked out of the room carrying a snorkel in hand.
All of a sudden a random shouting of words were blared out through the dinner party.
“Bill I hope you freaking die!” screamed the man whose name hasn’t been stated.
“Well man what did you expect me to do? Stay with you? I had places to go and people to see and you did nothing but hold me back!” replied Bill in outburst.
“DO YOU ALL WANT TO KNOW WHY I BROUGHT YOU ALL HERE??!!” Screamed Montressour in his loudest voice.
Then the lights went off…. And they never came back on.
While Tessie was walking to the lottery, she spotted a billboard sign. The sign read "Come to the Dinner Party today...Everybody free until 8:00 pm." When she got to the Lottery, Mr. Summers said, "I postponed the Lottery because we got invited to a dinner party." Everyone was looking shocked. Then Tessie found her husband and told him about the billboard she saw. "Call our babysitter, so we can make it on time," he said to her. When they arrived there, A very old man with enormous wings was already sitting down. He told them, "Don't be afraid, i'm still just a normal person." They said, "OK" and sat down. Two minutes later, Mr. Summers walked and greeted Mr. and Mrs. Hutchinson. Hi guys; How'd you two get here?" he asked. "Well, my wife saw a billboard on her way to the Lottery," he explained. Well, it's always a pleasure to see you two," said Mr. Summers. "Back to you," said Tessie in a kind voice. A few seconds later, Montressor walked in saying in his accent, "Hello you guys, how are you?" All replied, "Fine". He grabbed him a chair next to the old man with wings and asked him, "What's this dinner party for?" The old man said, "I don't know." Then back to back, Rainsford, Zaroff, Toto and Joel, Their parents, and Bill walked in. Everyone stood up and greeted each other. After everyone sat down, the waiter came to ask them, "What will you all like to drink?" Zaroff asked for water and they all asked for the same. After they ate, Toto asked, "Who planned this?" Everybody was looking at each other with weird looks on their faces. Five minutes later, Fortunato, Ivan, and the classmates came from the back door. Montressor, Zaroff, Toto, and Joel were afraid because they thought they were dead. Tessie and Rainsford stood up and said, "We planned this dinner party to get back at a few of you for what you did to us. Montressor killed Fortunato, Zaroff scared Rainsford, Toto and Joel left the classmates in the water. But the others(Mr. Summers, My Husband, The parents, Bill, and The very old man with enormous wings) were just used so you guys wouldn't get suspicious." Now we've gave you four special plates...Meaning you will die in two weeks," said Tessie.
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Pretending not to know what happened, Montressor calmly tries talks to the family and the friends of Fortunato at his memorial.
ReplyDeleteMontressor: �What happened to our beloved friend, you beloved father was a complete tragic. I just really hope that his soul finds its way to The Great Wine Cellar in the sky. Fortunato will always be remembered.�
Rainsford: �Thank you Mr. Montressor for that kind word about the once loved Fortunato. Now, will everyone find their way to the living room for the dinner that has been served.
(The big round dinner table in the home of once living Fortunato)
Rainsford:� I�m still in shock about Fortunato�s death.�
Whitney: �Yea, Me to, it is so hard to believe that our old sailing buddy has go up to Glory.�
Rainsford: �I still find it a little strange that no one knows how he exactly died.�
Whitney: �Oh shut up and pass me some more dressing! What, do you think, General Zaroff hunted him down like an animal and killed him:�(sarcastically)
(Handing the bowl of dressing to his fellow sailor)
Rainsford: � You are such an insensitive jerk!�
Whitney: � Yup, and you were hunted down like an animal.�
(A piece of food lands Rainford�s arm in his mid-sentence)
Rainsford: �HEY! You stupid little brats STOP playing with your food and eat it!�
General Zaroff: � I say, Mr. Rainsford, why they�re only children.�
Rainsford: �And I say General Zaroff, You�re only a cold blooded murderer!�
Ivan: (with a mouthful of chicken, macaroni, cornbread, and greens) �HEY, you take that back, monkey!�
Toto: (laughing hysterically) Ahh! He just called you a monkey!(still laughing)
Joel: � Mr. Rainsford are you going to let that donkey�s butt face talk to you like that? If that were me�.�
Mrs. Hutchinson: �Hey, hey, hey, whatever you to are having problems about can it wait now. This is a time for the deceased and his family not for ignorance.�
Mr. Summers: �Mrs. Hutchinson is right, this a time for Fortunato and his loved ones-�
Tessie Hutchinson: �Kiss up!�
Mrs. Hutchinson: Tessie Hutchinson watch your mouth that is a grown man! Now you apologize.�
Tessie Hutchinson: (with a mouthful of cornbread and collared greens) �I�m sorry Mr. Summers�
Mr. Summers: � I accept your cornbread and collared green apology�
Their Parents: � As for you two, when we get home don�t you dare touch that boat or those scuba suits!�
Toto: � B b but Joel was the one who said�.�
Their Parents: �So, and you laughed�
Rainsford: � Ha-ha�
(Toto gives Rains ford a dirty look)
Their Classmates: �Ooo, Joel and Toto just got put in check by both their parents at the same time�
Bill: �Can we all stop arguing and laughing at each other and try to love one another.�
The Man: � Speaking of love, where the heck was all the love when I hurt my foot!�
Bill: �Can we please not talk about this now at this time?�
The Man: � NO, you left me to die that night!!�
Bill: �I�m sorry.�
The Man: � Oh whatever man, you still left me to die!�
The Old Man: (taps glass to get everyone�s attention) � HELLO, Fortunato his family, memorial��
Everyone: (arguing with each other) �SHUT UP!�
The Old Man: (drinking wine and talking to himself) � I bet Fortunato is looking down and saying, �WTF�
It was a beautiful Saturday afternoon. The sun was out with a little breeze just enough to disguise the heat. There were flyers out all around about the big event. Everyone was excited and getting ready for the dinner party. It was the very first get together of all the 9th grade literature-fiction unit stars. It's 1:30 pm and Mr. summers was already standing at the door to greet the first guest. Mr. summers heard a car pull up which made him even more excited. It was Montresor.
ReplyDeleteMr. Summers: good afternoon, Montresor. Its so nice to see you, why so early?
Montresor (ignoring Mr. Summers' question): so where's Fortunato?
Mr. Summers: oh he'll be here soon.
Montresor: good. (he said firmly). I've been waiting for this for a very long time.
In less than two minutes, two more cars pull up. The first car's windows were so tinted dark, it was hard to tell who were inside. It was as if you had your hand over your face, or your eyes closed, if you tried looking through the windows. The door finally opens. It was Rainsford and Whitney. Whitney was sleep and unaware as usual.
Rainsford: Get up, man! We're here!
As Rainsford gets out of the car, he dropped his cigarette and fell out of the car while trying to reach for it. Him and Whitney finally make it out of the car and head toward the party.
Mr. summers: Hello, gentlemen. Welcome to the Lit. Dinner Party!
Rainsford: Well, hello stoner. (He says jokingly)
Whitney: Been pickin' on Whitney lately?
Mr. Summers: Sigh* Just go inside.
As Mr. Summers said that, the second car was actually carrying Mr. and Mrs. Hutchinson.
Rainsford: Haha! How ironic?
Mr. Hutchinson: Hello Mr. Summers! Doing okay today?
Mr. Summers: Just fine.
Mrs. Hutchinson looks at Mr. Summers puzzled for not speaking. You could still see scars from when she was unrightfully stoned.
Mr. Summers: Oh…hello Hutchinson.
Tessie: …. Yes, hello. And please don’t refer to me as Mrs. Hutchinson. Me and Bill are no longer together.
Mr. Summers: That's fine, just go in and have yourselves a good time.
Fortunato pulls up just in time. He still has shackles on his feet and ankles from the incident with him and Montresor.
Mr. Summers: hello, Fortunato. Montresor was looking for you earlier.
Fortunato (gullible as usual): Great. Its nice to see him again! I really hope he's planning to see me for a good cause this time.
Ivan and Zaroff finally came.
Mr. Summers: Hello guys! Nice to see you.
Ivan walks straight passed Mr. Summers. Mr. Summers thought he was being rude, not knowing he's mute and deaf, so he pulls out a pocket of stones and is ready to attempt to stone him.
General Zaroff: No! No! No! He did not hear what you said, for he is mute and deaf. Anyways is this dinner party held as a head start of food before the big game?
Mr. Summers: No, sir. It's just a reuniting of all the Lit. Fiction-unit characters.
Toto and joel have now showed up drenched in water.
Mr. Summers: what's going on?
Toto: oh, we just wanted to take our boat for a ride before the party.
Joel: yea, but, we kind of fell off. And our classmates are on their way. Its just that they almost drowned again. So we had to save them.
Toto: that’s why we're so late. Sorry.
Mr. Summers: it's fine. Where are your parents?
Joel: their on their way. They just finished arguing. There going to be about 10 minutes later.
Mr. Summers: ok. I just want this to be perfect.
Just then. An angel appearance is in the clouds.
Mr. Summers: I guess God heard my wish?
The angel was coming closer and closer, and then crashed through the room where the party was. It was the Old Man With Enormous Wings.
"How Are You Guys Today" Montressor Said.
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He Then Glanced At Ivan And General Zorrof.
Then He Looked Over At The Two Men Bill And A Man That Was With Bill That Wouldnt Stop Arguing. Toto Asked Montressor Questions And Then He Spoke Of A Light And The Children Looked Scaed As Ever Like They Seen A Ghost. Everyone Was Just Talking Mr.Summers Was Laughing At Tessie Because She Fell. Rainsford Said "What Is This This Couldnt Be A Dinner" The Parents Was Trying To Calm Everyone Down. Joel Walked Out The Room With Something In His Hands. Everyone Was Looking For Whitney.
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ReplyDeleteremember when the most famous dinner party took place. Where, you may ask? At the most unique, tranquility and I say so my self, interesting restaurtart. Its beautiful to enter the restaurt. The most famous characters from well known authors go their. For instance, Montressor, Forunato ,Rainford ,Ivan, Whitney ,and many more interesting characters. Montressor is someone who is not so friendly with Fortunato. Forunato has a problem drinking and have done things to Montressor which isn’t kind. Rainsford which is a known hunter and Zaroff who has a weird hunting island. Ivan who is very dumb in the head works for Zaroff. Whitney is Rainford ship pal and Mr. Summer works as a box carrier.
It was Tessie Hutchinson big day. It was her 35th and she was having a dinner party. the biggest dinner party of the year. It was the biggest party the village ever had. There were going to be hundreds of guest. People that Tessie knew from other stages in her life were going to be there. Everyone was already at the resturant waiting on Tessie. When she finally arrived at the resturant she everyone was there, except only around 3 friends. Everyone sat a long table, mainly with the people that they knew best. From the end of the taable was Toto, Joel,their Parents, and their classmates. Then there were two empty seats. Next was Montressor, Fortunato, Ivan Whitney, Rainsford, Zaroff, Mr.Summers, Mr.Hutchinson, Bill, the man, and the very old man with enormous wings. "Dad if we win the cake eating contest can we have another party, and invite all our classmates ?" asked Toto. "NO ! I will never come to another that you guys have. You killed everyone in the class, except for yourselfs, and if I was still alive, and in my body I would kill you right now !" screamed one of the classmates. "Yea you tell them !" Even more of them shouted. "Hey calm down it wasnt just his fault." said joel. "Yea youre right its yours too." said another. "Everyone just shout up !" yelled Toto. "Who are you all talking to." asked their dad. " They have been doing this every since the incident. and there will be no cake for you guys tonight." All of sudden everyones head turned toward the end of the table. There was a big arguement between the very old man with enormous wings. "What are you guys looking at " yelles the old man. "Get them out of here NOW ! Im sick of this I am a real angel and Im not going to sit here and have these people stare at me like Im some kind of freak !" Then in walkes Tessie, "Sorry, im late. " she said." Hey remember you left me, maybe to die ." screamed Bill. The man said " It wasnt ..." then Mr.Summers interrupted, "Hi everyone I'm mr.Summers and I will be hosting this marvelous dinner party. Rainsford then said, " I traveled all the way from the pacific island to come to this party. This is my long lost best friend and I would like to wish her a happy birthday and i even traveled with someone that I despise of."hey it was only a game you win some and you lose some. Its life and I think that this guy should try a little round of it." stated General Zaroff. Montressour said," what are you talking about, you dont want a piece of me" Fortunado said" yeaa.He's a real murderer do you see me ?" Everyone chated among themselves. even strangers. Ivan and whitney even had a brief conversation. Ivan said, "where are you from?" "A little of everywhere." answered Whitney. The night was good and everyone was gettting along.
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The Man:Why did you go so far away Bill.
ReplyDeleteBill:Hush up now i'm eating grub.
Fortunado:At least you weren't burried in a tomb for almost acentury!
Montressor:Well you did insult me.
The Classmates:That's better than being drowned at ayoung age.
Toto:Dont blame me, Joel filled the house with water!
Joel:Nuh uh it was your idea!
Mrs.Huthchinson:Those kids remind me of ours.
Mr.Hutchinson:Shut up! Mr.Summers is drawing the ticket now!
Rainsford:So, that's not as fun as hunting.
Me:I know you all hate each other, but can you please stop whinning like pushovers and just eat the dang food!!!
Lately I’ve been eating a lot of pork.
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this guy said to me in the doc’s office.
“I eat to much salt with everything." I drink twenty cups of soda every day. I eat and drink alot.I’m having trouble with my breathing.”
Then he lowered his eyes.“Plus, I don’t always clear off the table.when I’m through eating. I forget.I just get up; and walk away.
I tell my mama and brothers goodybye."I forget". I just get up and walk away. what do you thinks going to happened." I said." my mama came down stairs and said get in this kitchen and clean this up. "I said OK I REPLIED." AND I ended up having to clean the kitchen everyday.
Mr. Summers(host): Good evening everyone
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Mr.Summers: Were here to today to get together and catch up with one another. Some of you may have seen each other lately and some of us haven't seen each other in years. We have good food and entertainment for our guest here. Enjoy the night.
Montressor: Fortunato, man i haven't seen you in years where have you been
Fortunato: Good man what about you
Montressor: Good, you're not still drinking are you?
Fortunato: Yea man that's all I know
Montressor: Wow, well I see you haven't changed. Anyway what is that thing over there, it looks like a an angel.
Fortunato: I don't know what it is it probably is an angel.
Rainford: What's up guys. How you all doing
Both : Good
Rainsford: Still drinking Fortunato?
Fortunato: Yea man
Rainford: Well that on you. What is that angel thing over there
Montressor: I don't know, we were jus talking about that
Rainsford: Well I'll catch up with you guys later
Both: Alright
Mr. Summers: How you guys doing?
Montressor: Doing good sir
Fortunato: Same here what about yourself?
Mr. Summers: Good man, just enjoying the dinner
Fortunato: Thats good
Mr. Summers: Well you guys have enjoy the dinner
Both: Ok
Mrs. Hutchinson: What do you think that is over there?
Tessie Hutchinson: I don't know, it looks like an angel. I don't think its fair how they eat by tables, why can't we just all get up and eat normal. If we did it that way, I would be in the front.
Mrs. Hutchinson: Maybe it is, but I dont know why they do that. Maybe they want it to be organised or something.
Tessie Hutchinson: Well its not to organised if people are waiting for a long time.
Mrs. Hutchinson: Just calm down, you'll eat.
Mr. Summers: How have you been Ms. Hutchinson?
Ms. Hutchinson: Good, Good. You did good with the hosting. Speaking of hosting, since you're the host what is that thing over there?
Mr. Summers: That the very old man with enormous wings
Mrs. Hutchinson: Tell me he's not walking over here
Very Old Man: How yall doing?
Both: Good
Mr. Summers: How about you?
Very Old Man: Good man, just enjoying these wings
Mr. Summmers: Thats good
Very Old Man: Well I'll see you'll later
Both: Ok
Mrs.Hutchinson: Who are those two hansom boys right there?
Mr. Summers: That's Joel and Toto
Mrs. Hutchinson: O Ok
Mr. Summers: I see you looking around so I'll just show you who everyone is. Over there is the man. Right here next to the table is Bill. Over there is Ivan and Whitney. Thats the very old man with enormous wings in the air. The one in the front of the line, talking smack is Zaroff. The man behind him that keeps drinking is Fortunato. And behind him is Montressor.
Mrs. Hutchinson : O ok, thanks
Mr. Summers: No problem. Well this thing is about over so I'm about to end this thing. It was nice talking to you again Mrs. Hutchinson.
Mrs. Hutchinson: Same to you
Mr. Summers: Well I hope everyone has enjoyed themselves. This has been a great night. Thank you musicians and dancers for coming out to this fantastic dinner. I hope to see you'll soon. Goodnight everyone.
Characters:
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Fortunato
Rainsford
Ivan
Whitney
Zaroff
Mr. Summers
Mrs. Hutchinson
Tessie Hutchinson
Toto
Joel
Their Parents
Their Classmates
Bill
The Man
The Very Old Man with Enormous Wings
One beautiful morning Mr. Summers sent out a long message to his 16 guest. The message read “I would for you all to meet in my beautiful backyard for a special dinner.” Everybody responded yes and met him at his front door. Rainsford stated “It’s been a long day, I have been lost at sea, BRING THE FOOD” Everybody stared at the very old man with enormous wings like they seen a shiny expensive diamond. “He is an old angel. Mommy is that grandpa?” stated Bill. Fortunato stands still waiting on Montressor to seek his revenge. Everybody take a seat at the table and it goes silent. The Very Old Man with Enormous Wings is having a little trouble fitting into the seat. *giggles*, Joel and their children are laughing at him because his flab and wings are tangled up in the handle on the chair. Whitney runs to the rescue. “Pass the wine. This is going to be a long night” Fortunato reaches for the knife to stab Montressor for trying to suffocate him in smoke. “I wonder if I just…” *C R A S H* something interrupted his thoughts. Everybody’s heads turned toward the dark closet. “I hope they can’t see us” one of the children said. “Were dead idiot, of course they can’t” says another. Mr. Summers gets up and walks toward the closet and C R A S H. The lights go on and off and he is GONE. “LISTEN UP, AND LISTEN GOOD” said the man. “SOMEBODY WILL CONFESS AND THEY WILL CONFESS NOW.” He took out a gun and pointed it toward Fortunato. “You had that knife in your hand for the longest. Where did you put him?” “I have no idea what you are…” C R A S H. The man is missing now. Everybody is wondering what is going on. *Drip Drip Drip* “What the..?” stated Bill. “OH MY GOD ITS BLOOD” Everybody looks up and they see the man and Mr. Summers on the ceiling fan. “Ok, jokes over. This is going a little too far” Whitney said. “I’m calling the… *SCREAMS* HELP MEEE. LET ME GOOOOOOO *Gun shot*” The crowd grew silent. As quick as possible everybody else in the room grabs their stuff and quickly runs out side. They check the doors, windows, pathways, EVERYTHING IS LOCKED. *C R A S H* And they were never seen again…
KIRBY SAID..
ReplyDeleteonce upon a time there was a very old man with wings.he had two of his most best friends to come in town.the next day he calls them and ask them to come over for a diner party.their names was rainsford and ivan and zaroff he was a general. he told them that it was going to be at this club he owns and that it was at 7 o'clock.the next day they bowed their heads and prayed amen everyone said.have you ever tried to fly with clouds stuck in your wings man is it tough to flap the very old man says.hey rainsford hows it been the past few years," oh man its been a brezze except for when i got a concussion how did that happen says the very old man with wings.i really dont say's rainsford. aha i remeber said zaroff.whoop's ivan signs oh man. why would you say that zaroff what happen,hey you guys drop it no no i want to hear this oh poor rainsford zaroff said your just pathetic. oh am i huh.yes you are.ivan say's hey guys come on its suppose to be a party not a arguing session.all i want to know is what happened.im gone say's zaroff ,nooooooo wit said the old man.BYE!. geisha. so ivan you to yea got to go. really say's the old man. well see you guys later.THE END!!
Khalil Browne said...
ReplyDeleteOnce upon a time there was a very old man with wings he just came from the heavens to enjoy this dinner party he heard so much about from his friend. On his way to the party he was called on his halo and the call was from Ivan he said ”Hey don’t forget the potato salad unless you want pain in your life “said Ivan. In a uncertain manner He answered “I will have it and be there as soon as possible’’. Unfortunately, getting caught up in the air current in northern Georgia the very old man with wings took a long dreadful flight to the supermarket and purchases the potato salad and heads towards Ivan’s house. The very old man with wings crashes through the chimney just in time to pray before eating food and said “ Sorry imp late ”. Everyone attended the dinner party rainsford, zaroff ,and fortunato .As they took their seats rainsford and zaroff started arguing about what happened the week before last In the jungle. Curious about what happened fortunato and the very old man with wings said “Tell us”. Then rainsford started to explain what went down on that day then suddenly zaroff rudely interrupted him and said ”If you keep making the game sound worst then what it really is I will really kill you“ afraid to keep speaking about the game rainsford said “ My wife is calling I haft to go ”. Then ivan looked at everyone in an angry way and said “Thanks for the party it was great” (in a sarcastic manner) . Then kicked everyone out of his house.
Mr. Summers: Hello everyone my name Mr. Summers and I will be hosting this wonderful dinner.
ReplyDeleteMontressor: This would be a great time to seek my revenge.
Fortunato: Ha! Revenge?
Riansford: You kids need to grow up you are getting on my last nerve, as a matter of fact Zaroff you hunt like a kid.
Old man: My back is Aching I need to see a doctor.
Bill: Same here my friend.
Whitney: Are you sure you need a doctor sir you look fine to me.
Old Man: you’re right I’m kind of okay.
Whitney: what about you Bill?
Bill: Well if the old man can hang tight maybe I can.
Mr. Summers: Here comes the waitress.
The man: Montressor what do you want to order?
Montressor: REVENGE!!!!!!!!!!
Rainsford: Could you stop please!?
Montressor: What are you going to do!?
Whitney: Why don’t guys calm down?
Montressor: No this guy won’t shut up!
Mr. Summers: Let’s move on with the dinner please.
Bill: why did you leave me?
The man: I had to, to survive.
Zaroff: that’s messed up man
The man: I had to though.
The Classmates: we died and went to heaven like the old man with enormous wings.
Rainsford: where did these kids come from?
Old man: I don’t even know
Mr. Summers: I’m full so I guess it’s time to go home goodnight everyone
One morning Mr. Summers sent out invitations to everyone to come and join him for a dinner party. The invitation said “Hello my fellow friends, I am sending out this invitation to invite you to a dinner party held at the hall of fame. For further information RSVP before October 10, 2011.” Mr. Summers was planning this dinner party for months and couldn’t wait to have everyone together all at one time. So days and weeks went by and the dinner party was approaching quicker than expected to. That’s when Mr. Summers went to hall and started to set up things. Everyone started to arrive; first to arrive was Montressor, Fortunato, Ivan, Rainsford, Whitney and General Zaroff. Next were Mrs. Hutchinson and her daughter Tessie Hutchinson. Then Toto, Joel, Their Parents and Their Classmates showed up. Mr. Summers was surprised to see everyone. Also the old man with enormous wings dropped by with Bill and a few others. That’s when everyone took their seats and started to have group conversations. Mr. Summers started to speak to get everyone’s attention so they can start the dinner party. And that’s when e food started to come out and people started to eat and other things happened.
ReplyDeleteMr. Summers: Good Afternoon Everyone
(Everyone is still talking with their peers about other things)
Mr. Summers clears throat and speaks again: Good Afternoon Everyone
Montressor and Others: Good Afternoon Mr. Summers
Mr. Summers: today is the day we all come together as one and speak on how we feel about each other, well talk about our problems like things we need to get off out chest.
Ivan: Cool, but all I want to do is start eating
Whitney: I agree, like can we speak on things once we get the food?
Toto and Joel: Yheaa, so Mr. Summers can you like bring out the food?
Mr. Summers: Sure guys (clears throat and yells) BRING OUT THE FOOD!
Tessie Hutchinson: Now that the food is here and all can we talk about whatever it is we need to talk about, because I have a lot that I want to say.
Mrs. Hutchinson: Tessie hunny, is that anyway to talk to any adult?
Tessie Hutchinson: No Ma’am but I’m just angry about the stupid lottery how I was the last to show up and all of a sudden I get stoned from a bunch of people who I thought who loved me.
Mr. Summers: We’re sorry for what happened to you Tessie, I know that I run the lottery but trust me it wasn’t supposed to happen that way.
Bill: So Tessie are you saying that where you from right? You draw these pieces of paper and whichever one has mark on it gets stoned.
Tessie: Bill you are correct
Their Parents: Toto, Joel and the Classmates I don’t understand why you didn’t turn off the light switch
Toto, Joel and the Classmates: It’s not our fault we couldn’t make it to the other side.
General Zaroff: Everyone just calm down, and let’s make peace.
Whitney, Ivan, and Rainsford: peace, peace what do you know about having peace, when you’re out in the wild killing harmless animals huh?
The Old Man with Enormous Wings: Really I don’t have a problem with anyone long as I know; to be honest I hardly know any of you all.
Mr. Summers: Okay you guys I guess this dinner party turned into a dinner disaster you know what the servers can come pick up the food and we all just leave because as you can see no one is getting alone and it’s kind of making me mad to know that we can’t have a simple dinner without arguing
One early morning Tessie decided to send out dinner part reservations.On them they each said,”I am hosting a dinner party an you all have been selected to come an join me.” Please RSVP before June 24.Tessie ahs been planning this party for months now but she knew that a lot of them didn’t like each other so much..She than rethought the idea of throwing the dinner party.She then decided that it was a good idea an keep the plan going..Finally June 24 came and everyone started to show up;first to arrive was montresor forunato, Ivan, Rainsford, Whitney and General Zaroff. Next was Mrs hutchinson. Then Toto, Joel, Their Parents and Their Classmates showed up. Tessie was surprised that everyone hasd showed upith enormous wings dropped by with Bill and a few others. That’s when everyone took their seats and started to have group conversations. Mr. Summers started to speak to get everyone’s attention so they can start the dinner party. And that’s when e food started to come out and people started to eat and other things happened.
ReplyDeleteTessie:Good afternoon everyone, we are gathered here today to catch up with each other an have a real good time here.
Everyone: Good afternoon Tessie!!
Montressor: Fortunato,man I haven’t seen you since that accident happened..Man, how you been?
Fortunato: I’ve been good how about yourself….(mumbles under breath…YOUR NOT GONA MAKE IT OUTTA HERE MONTRESSOR)
Montressor: so man hows life treating you
Fortunato: its been treatin me well other than that accident im good
Montressor: Wow, well I see you haven't changed. Hey man whats that thing over there with wings, it looks like a an angel
Old man with wings: I am an angel young man
Montressor:WOW I’ve never seen a real angel before wat about you fortunato?
Fortunato: I can honestly say I haven’t either
Old man with wings: Anyway where is Tessie I have to give her a gift
Both: she over by the dinner table
Rainsford: Wassup guys, whats going on?
Both: the same as usual
Rainsford: montressor how did that attack on fortunate go ??(OPPS)
Montressor : man that’s over an done with
Fortunato: yea man that’s over an done with…say rainsford, are you still on that island with ivan hunting humans??
(Ivan walks in an they both answer)
Both:why yes,yes I do and its really fun…you should come so we can hunt you guys
Montressor an fortunato: well uhh (runs away)
The kids: hey Tessie guess what we got for you
Tessie: what is it?
The kids: its golden water
Tessie: WHATT!!!
The kids: it’s a golden water party right
Tessie: nooooo it’s a dinner party
The kids: ooppps….we did it again
(THE GOLDEN WATER KILLS EVERYONE AT THE PARTY)